By Anita Mae Draper
Raise your hand if you've read a piece of
historical fiction and found fault with it. Can you see both my hands waving
high in the air? I'm ashamed to say I've not only found what I considered inaccuracies,
but I've actually told the authors (friends of mine) what I found. One laughed
it off because she'd discovered it too late, and the other disagreed with my
finding saying there has to be some leeway in fictional writing.
As my stories started their publishing
journey, my biggest fear was that someone would find a major flaw in my
historical facts. But who is to say what is a true fact? As God's creation, we
are all unique in what we see and process. Two people can witness the same
event and then report it differently based on what they perceived. The New
Testament is a good example of this where we find the same story of Jesus'
birth, repeated several times, yet each is different in details depending on
what the writer either saw, or what he decided was more important to write
about.
This blog reaches people around the world.
As such, we can look at the same item, yet call it by different names. How do
you choose which word to use? The solution is to cater to the intended
readership, right? But what if today's wording is different than what is
historically known? If this sounds confusing, look at this image:
Potbelly Stove in Railway Station, WDM North Battleford |
I took the photograph of a potbelly stove
in a railway station waiting room at the Western Development Museum in North
Battleford, Saskatchewan. It's the stove type I envisioned for my latest
novella, Love in Store. The stove
would be a fixture in my hero's store and is quite suited to the setting of
1890 Montana.
However, as I worked on the final edit, I
decided to see if it was called a potbelly, pot belly, or pot-bellied stove.
Guess what? I couldn't find reference to any of those terms. Here's what I did
find:
Sentinel, Large Cannon Stove. Source: 1888-9 Superior Stove Catalogue |
Pug, Globe Heater.
Source: 1890-1 Illustrated Catalogue of Favorite Stoves and Ranges |
Both of the above catalogue descriptions refer to it as a cannon stove and globe heater. My research in journals and
writings of the time commonly refer to it as a globe heater or parlor stove.
Potbelly doesn't appear until the 20th century. And surely I didn't
read everything from that period in history.
So what was I supposed to call the
potbelly-shaped stove in my story? If I described it as a cannon stove or globe
heater, would today's readers know what I meant? Would they skip over it, or
would they stop reading and wonder about it? For the full impact of the story,
I didn't want them to stop reading. But if I called it a potbelly stove, would
I be accused of not staying true to historical facts?
After
agonizing for hours, I left it alone. Perhaps someone will mention it someday
and say I was wrong. Hopefully, I'll smile and think back to when I did the
same to another writer or two. May God give me the grace to ignore what doesn't
matter, so I can enjoy historical fiction for what does.
What do you call such a stove?
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Mae Draper writes her historical romances under the western skies of the Canadian
prairie where her love of research and genealogy yield fascinating truths that
layer her stories with rich historical details. Her Christian faith is
reflected in her stories of forgiveness and redemption as her characters
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ReplyDeleteThank you for the interesting blog post, Anita. Getting all the facts correct is a challenge all writers face, but none more so than those writing historical fiction. I enjoyed looking at your photos- the snowy owl is stunning.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ruth. So funny when I looked at your post yesterday, the only bird I knew was the owl eagle, but only as 2 birds - an owl and an eagle, not one birth with both names. :)
DeleteThanks Anita. My son has the only "heater" like this I've ever seen, and it is a modern appliance. It's also not "pot-bellied" however you write it, as its belly is square. :-) Fun post.
ReplyDeleteAbout that spelling...when I was checking my final edits, I realized I'd spelled it as potbelly vs pot-bellied, so I added a correction along with the other errors I'd found. Except at that late stage into the publishing journey, some changes are accepted as being necessary, and others aren't. When I received my author copies, I peeked at the page. They'd left it at potbelly. So if an editor left it that way, I figured for the sake of continuity, I should use it that way too. It's another one of those...which one do I choose things.
DeleteAs for your son and his square heater...I've never seen a square potbelly, either.
Thanks for sharing. :)
We've always called stoves like that pot-bellies, and if you google it, it shows stoves like these. We have a couple of these old stoves, and my mother-in-law painted a couple of pictures of the. I would have to look up Cannon stove or Globe Heater.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the affirmation, Becky. I appreciate you sharing that. Your MIL is a painter? Treasure her. :)
DeleteThere's always a need for balance between what the historical character would say and what communicates with the modern reader. You might call it simply a "stove" and then mention how it's shape reminded you of a pot-bellied old gentleman, or better yet, a specific character's pot belly. Just a thought.
ReplyDeleteYou're right, LeAnne. Unfortunately, I didn't think about that until AFTER I'd submitted my final edits, and like I mentioned in a previous comment, I didn't even think of the stove until I received them.
DeleteThanks for commenting. I think I'll add this to my checklist for the future. :)