Tuesday, May 31, 2011

Analyze This: Writing Tips

It's Lisa here, with some writing tips I'd like to share with you. After writing for so many years, I sometimes find it difficult to be just a reader. Instead of enjoying a story line, I often have to stop myself from analyzing the story. But while this might make reading harder, it has also helped me learn what works and what doesn't work. (At least in my opinion.)

I recently took some time to write down tips that I've learned from reading novels, from writing books, and from editor comments on my own novels. This is something I use as a checklist for my own writing.

1. Anchor your story with a strong sense of setting.
2. Show, don’t tell!
3. Ensure that a clear goal is laid out for the protagonist so the reader knows the goal right away.
4. The main goal will carry a reader through a book. Smaller goals along the way will carry us to that big finish.
5. In Christian fiction, show the spiritual place of the hero/heroine. (Don’t assume the reader knows!)
6. Danger weaved into the story must have a connection to the main plot. (Don’t throw danger at your characters just to get your reader to turn the page)
7. Both the hero and the heroine need strong stakes in the situation.
8. Watch for characters and plot threads that disappear halfway in the book.
9. Avoid one-dimensional and clichéd characters.
10. Avoid predictable plots.
11. Avoid too many sentence fragments.
12. Avoid excessive conjunctions at the beginning of sentences.
13. Watch for characters talking themselves out of romantic feelings just for the sake of prolonging the romance thread.
14. In dialogue, use contractions to make it read more naturally.
15. Get rid of clichéd movements: pinch the bridge of his nose, rubbed his temples, shoved a lock of hair, combed his fingers…
16. Watch for repetitive words.
17. Avoid “on the nose” or forced dialogue.
18. Avoid skimming the surface of a characters’ belief as well as heavy preaching.
19. Ensure you don’t describe your characters’ spiritual lives only by what they do. (their church, music, books, etc.)
20. For suspense, keep the heart-pounding action and danger going throughout the story.
21. If you use POV changes, ensure each one continues to build the tension.
22. Details are important.
23. Deal with moral conflicts without preaching, and avoid looking at the subject as only black and white.
24. End the story when the end goal is achieved after the final climax.

What tips would you add to this list? I'd love to hear from you!

Lisa
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Lisa Harris is an award-winning author of twenty novels and novellas. She lives with her husband and their three children in Mozambique, Africa, where they work as missionaries. When she’s not busy writing or home schooling, she loves traveling, cooking different ethnic foods, and going on game drives through the African bush.

Her novel, Blood Ransom, was recently nominated for a Christy Award. To learn more about her books, you can visit her website here.

Monday, May 30, 2011

Interview and Book Review - Jewel of Persia by Roseanna M. White and book giveaway

Narelle here. I'm delighted to welcome Roseanna M. White back to our blog. Today we're giving away a copy of Roseanna's latest release, Jewel of Persia.

Roseanna M. White, author of A Stray Drop of Blood, makes her home in the mountains of Western Maryland with her husband, two small children, and the colony of dust bunnies living under her couch. After graduating from St. John’s College in Annapolis, MD, she and her husband founded the Christian Review of Books, where she is the editor. She is a member of ACFW, HisWriters, Biblical Fiction Writers, and HEWN Marketing.

Book Review by Narelle Atkins

Jewel of Persia (WhiteFire Publishing, 2011) is Roseanna M. White’s exciting Biblical fiction novel set in Persia around 480 BC during the reign of King Xerxes. Historical events from the Book of Esther are included in the story.

Kasia, a young Jewess, is bathing her feet in the icy river water in Susa when she has an unexpected encounter with King Xerxes. She doesn’t recognise the charming King, and she is more concerned about protecting her young charge, the future Queen Esther, than hiding her own identity.

King Xerxes is captivated by Kasia’s beauty and, much to Kasia’s father’s displeasure, decides he wants Kasia as his wife. Kasia is moved to the palace, and her friends and family assume her disappearance is caused by drowning in the river.

Twelve year old Esther is devastated by the loss of her best friend, only a few years after her parents passed away and her cousin Mordecai became her guardian.

Kasia falls in love with the King, and her life is in jeopardy because she is the King’s favorite wife. Palace life in the harem is a culture shock for the young Jewess, and her faith is tested and strengthened during the story. Drawing on historical events, the love story between Kasia and King Xerxes unfolds and provides a fascinating insight into the danger, jealousy and intrigue of life in the Persian Palace.

Jewel of Persia is a compelling story about royalty, fidelity and love, in the context of a society that expects their King to have numerous wives and concubines. The differences between Jewish and Persian society create conflict between Kasia and King Xerxes, who are from different worlds and hold diverse values and religious beliefs. I recommend Jewel of Persia for those looking for a powerful and challenging Biblical fiction story.

Narelle: Jewel of Persia draws on Biblical historical facts from the Book of Esther and Persian history. How did you go about researching Persian history?

Roseanna: Well, in college I’d read Histories by Herodotus, which is the Greek account of the Greco-Persian War, written a couple decades after the events. So when I weighed the evidence as to which king it was in Esther and decided it was most likely Xerxes, I was really excited to realize I already knew a lot about it. I then sat down and mapped out the events from Esther and Herodotus and was even more excited to realize they click together pretty perfectly.

I reread Histories and took notes as I went, which gave me the plot-points I needed for the book. Nearly every major event in Jewel of Persia revolves around history recorded either in the Bible or by Herodotus.

But to learn about the Persian culture itself, I did a lot of online research, including (my favorite) a fabulous documentary made in conjunction with an exhibit about Ancient Persia by the British Museum. I spent a lot of time reading about the climate, the land, the society, and the religion. I also got out a few books from my library on the subjects, though they didn’t have much to choose from, LOL. There’s a reason the British Museum entitled their exhibit “The Forgotten Empire.”

Narelle: Kasia and her family are Jews living in Persia under King Xerxes rule. What struggles did the Jews face as aliens in a foreign land?

Roseanna: Well, by the time Xerxes took the throne and my story begins, the Jews have already been given leave to go back to Israel if they so desired, which is where the books of Ezra and Nehemiah in the Bible come in. But many chose to stay, my characters among them.

The Persians were actually very modern when it comes to religious tolerance, etc. They were a monotheistic society worshiping Ahura Mazda (what is now called Zoroastrianism, though at the time it would have been called Mazdayasna), an uncreated being whose enemy is another, evil uncreated being called Angra Mainyu. But as the empire expanded, they granted everyone the right to worship as they pleased. Still, “tolerant” societies don’t often get along with religious groups who claim to have an “only” behind them. Though we see the Persian kings themselves give favor to the Jews, we also see evidence that others hated them.

I chose to put my heroine in a family that was proud of its Jewish heritage and prejudiced against the Persians just as the Persians were prejudiced against them. But then I played up the contrast of Mordecai and Esther, who were more fair-minded about that. I also had a choice to make as to whether I wanted Mordecai to have always hidden his heritage (which is one way to read the book of Esther) or if rather he hid only his association with Esther (which is another way to read it). I chose the one that worked best with my plot. =)

Narelle: The Persians had their own gods and religious beliefs. How did their beliefs differ from the Jews and how did it affect their outlook on life?

Roseanna: As I touched on above, Mazdayasna was also a monotheistic religion. On the surface, it might look much like Judaism: one supreme god, who embodies all that’s good. One main enemy of the god, who tries to sway humanity against the good one. And a slew of minor deities much like angels, who do the bidding of either Ahura Mazda or his enemy, Angra Mainyu.

The real challenge for me came from the fact that Herodotus talks about the Persians as if they’re worshipping Greek gods, which we know they didn’t. So most of the history we have to go on reflects religious opinions that don’t hold true to Mazdayasna . . . which, given the fact that Persian society strayed from it within the next half-century, actually sounds reasonable. So I had Xerxes caught between the beliefs in his god that came from their great prophet and the evidence he saw of what he thought was his god, but which the Jewish characters recognized as an enemy of Jehovah.

I did have fun, though, trying to portray my villains as very faithful . . . but to the wrong deity. I wanted to make it clear that their faith wasn’t in idols or smoke and mirrors, but in a living being . . . an enemy of God. But because they truly believed in this god they served, they carried out its will to oppose and even destroy those faithful to Jehovah, who they identified as the evil one in their religion.

What it came down to was something that harkens toward Jesus saying we will know the spirits by the fruits they produce—in my story, the deities of the Persians produced fruits of hatred and destruction while the God of the Jews produced fruits of love and healing.

Yep, fun stuff. =)

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Roseanna, thanks so much for joining us today. It's been a pleasure to interview you and learn more about Biblical fiction.

By commenting on today’s post you can enter the drawing to win a copy of Jewel of Persia. The winner will have the choice of receiving either a print or electronic copy. The drawing will take place on Friday, June 3 and the winner announced on Sunday, June 5. Please leave an email address [ ] at [ ] dot [ ] where you can be reached.

"Void where prohibited; the odds of winning depend on the number of entrants. Entering the giveaway is considered a confirmation of eligibility on behalf of the enterer in accord with these rules and any pertaining local/federal/international laws."

To learn more about Roseanna M. White, please visit her website, blog and Christian Review of Books.

Narelle Atkins writes contemporary inspirational romance. She resides in Canberra, Australia with her husband and children. To learn more about Narelle, please visit her website.

Sunday, May 29, 2011

SUNDAY EDITION


Coming Up This Week

Monday

Narelle Atkins: Interview, Book Review and Book Giveaway - Jewel of Persia by Roseanna M. White

Tuesday

Lisa Harris: Analyze This - Writing Tips

Wednesday

Grace Bridges: International Views of Americanisms

Thursday

Grace Bridges: American Views of Internationalisms

Friday Devotion

Kathi Macias: Resting and Working

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Contest Giveaway Winners

Chris S is the winner of Davey & Marie Jank's book, Our Witchdoctors are too Weak (Valerie's post, May 19)

Congratulations Chris!

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News

Marcia Lee Laycock's new devotional e-book for writers, Abundant Rain, is now available to download at Smashwords http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/58017
Abundant Rain is a collection of devotionals written over the past few years for Novel Journey www.noveljourney.blogspot.com

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Contest News

Lisa Harris' book, Blood Ransom, is a 2011 Christy Award nominee in the Contemporary Romance category - congrats Lisa!

Harry Kraus' book, The Six-Liter Club, is a finalist in the Faith, Hope & Love Inspirational Chapter of RWA's 2011 Inspirational Readers Choice Award in the Long Contemporary category - congrats Harry!

Kathi Macias' book, Red Ink, is a finalist in the Advanced Writers & Speakers Association's 2011 Golden Scroll Book of the Year Award in the fiction category - congrats Kathi!

Jeanette Windle's book, Freedom's Stand, is a finalist in the Advanced Writers & Speakers Association's 2011 Golden Scroll Book of the Year Award in the fiction category - congrats Jeanette!

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New Book Releases

Mary Hawkins' contemporary set in Australia, Justice at Baragula, Book Three in the Baragula series, is a May 2011 release from Ark House Press.

Christine Lindsay's historical set in India circa 1919, Shadowed in Silk, is a May 2011 release in e-book format and a September 2011 release in print format from Whitefire Publishing.

Jeanette Windle's contemporary set in Afghanistan, Freedom's Stand, the sequel to Veiled Freedom, is a May 2011 release from Tyndale.

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Upcoming Book Releases

Jo-Anne Berthelsen's book, Helena's Legacy, will be a June 2011 release from Ark House Press.

Nick Daniels' thriller set in the Middle East, The Jihad's Messiah, Book 1 in the Jihad series, will be a September 2011 release from Risen Books.

Rita Galieh's book, Signed, Sealed and Delivered, will be a September 2011 release from Ark House Press.

Kathi Macias has a Freedom series involving human trafficking coming soon from New Hope Publishers. Deliver Me from Evil (September 2011) is set in San Diego, CA. and the Golden Triangle area of Thailand; Special Delivery (January 2012); The Deliverer (April 2012).

Kathi Macias' Christmas themed book, A Christmas Journey Home, set in Arizona and Ensenada, Mexico, will be an October 2011 release from New Hope Publishers.

To find more International Christian Fiction books, please visit our Recent Releases page, Backlist Titles page and our International Christian Fiction wiki.

Friday, May 27, 2011

DEVOTION: Instant Messaging - Shirley Corder


A loud "ping" sounded from my computer speakers. I blinked back tears of longing as a small notice appeared on my monitor. "Hello? You there?"

My daughter was online. She lives on a mission field on the other side of the world. I am in South Africa, but her computer and my computer were linked. I only had to respond.

For the next fifteen minutes, we typed furiously, laughed at each other's comments, and enjoyed each other's company despite the many miles that separated us. This was way before 2003, when Skype arrived on the scene. Neither of us had webcams in those days, so we couldn't see each other. Debbie's bandwidth link was extremely slow, so speaking was frustrating or even impossible. All we could do was type. But I cannot describe the rare joy of being able to communicate in real time with one another.

In ways I cannot begin to understand, the moment I hit enter on my keyboard in South Africa, my daughter in Venezuela could read the words I had just typed. I couldn't communicate with her if she was away from her computer, and vice versa. We had to both be online at the same time.

I see this as true of my writing. I don't need to understand the entire publishing process to make a connection with my readers. But if they put down the book, I will not be able to communicate with them any more. If I have a message for them, or a story to tell them, (and if I haven't, I shouldn't be writing) we have to both be there at the same time. I am there through my article or book. But are they still reading? My job as a writer is to communicate in such a way they want to keep coming back.

Instant messaging is also like prayer. God is on one end of the communication, and I am on the other. Sometimes I fail to connect, and the messages cease to flow. But God is always online, waiting for me to return. I have no idea how prayer works, but I don't need to. I only need to make the connection.

Even before they finish praying to me, I will answer their prayers. Isaiah 65:24 (TEV)


SHIRLEY M. CORDER lives in South Africa and Instant Messaging keeps her in touch with her writing world. Her book, Rise and Soar above the Cancer Valley is due for release in the USA in 2012, and she is contributing author to seven other books. Hundreds of her inspirational and life-enrichment articles have been published internationally. You can contact Shirley through her writing website, her Rise and Soar cancer site, or follow her on Twitter.

Thursday, May 26, 2011

Back Stage With Freedom's Stand

My youngest child has at last cut the umbilical cord and is taking those first tottering steps in the big, wide world outside my hovering embrace. Not some unanticipated late-life flesh-and-blood offspring [my husband just breathed relief!], though the birthing has been far more prolonged and arduous than any of the four humans who list me as parent on their birth certificates.

No, it just that my latest book, Freedom's Stand, rolled off the press this month. Its exquisite face looks up at me from the pages of CBD catalogs. It holds hands with illustrious neighbors in Tyndale's summer fiction ads. It makes its own way beyond my control into bookstores and libraries. As a parent, I hold my own breath, urging it on to a long and healthy life in that competitive, even cut-throat that is today's book publishing world.

Much has been said elsewhere both by myself and others about the message and story of Freedom's Stand [see Christianbook.com's Fiction Blog], my own heart for Afghanistan and its people, issues of religious freedom and the persecuted church. So I won't linger on the book's contents here. In brief, Freedom's Stand is the sequel to 2010 Christian Book Award and Christy Award finalist, Veiled Freedom, set in contemporary Afghanistan. Veiled Freedom brings together on Kabul's dusty streets a disillusioned Special Forces veteran, an idealistic relief worker, and an Afghan refugee, each in their own personal quest for truth and freedom. Returning in Freedom's Stand, these three unlikely allies soon discover that in a country where political and religious injustice runs rampant, the cost of either may be higher than they realize. Will any one of them be willing to pay the ultimate price?

But one question I've been asked repeatedly in interviews may have value to ICFW readers. "I know you weren't on the ground over there that long nor able to travel widely due to security concerns. How were you able to portray such a realistic depiction of Afghanistan and its people?" Here are a few of my own stratagems in writing Freedom's Stand which any good novelist can duplicate to bring alive a distant place and people:

Google Satellite Mapping: Where exactly does the Kabul Stadium, where the Taliban once stoned female offenders before soccer matches, lay from the Wazir Akbar Khan neighborhood, home to embassies, private contractors--and my main character's humanitarian project? What is the landscape around Afghanistan's notorious top security prison, Pul-e-Charkhi, or its interior layout? Can I triangulate a villain's luxury compound, a refugee's sanctuary, and a defensible escape route in the reality of the high, dusty plateau overlooking Kabul where Pul-e-Charkhi sits?

All of this and so much more is possible with today's technology--and those once-classified global satellite maps. Even in Kabul, Afghanistan, zoom will get you close enough to track your characters through every back alley, plot every location, mark every prison access entrance. [Looking for the US embassy? It alone is missing from close-ups. But if you know where to look, what's behind that sudden blur is clear.]. For continual reference, I kept mounted on my office wall a full-sized, fold-out driving map, available quite reasonably on Amazon from Nelles or International Travel Maps, for virtually any country.

Boots on the ground: Yes, I had boots on the ground for every aspect of my book--military, private security contractors, humanitarian aid, medical, pilot, State Department. These were the same who read the manuscript before press to ensure I had no errors. Finding boots on the ground is not as hard as it may seem, thanks to that 'six degrees of separation' principle we hear about. If you don't know experts in the fields you want to write about, you likely know someone who does, or their friends know someone. It is often just a matter of putting the word out. And since human beings do like to share their expertise, you'd be surprised how available most prove to be for input, if only to make sure you get their world right on page!

Blogs: But there is another type of 'boots on the ground' far more accessible and often fruitful. In this day and age, one can find people anywhere on the planet with time on their hands and a willingness to spill their daily lives, post pictures of their environment, vent their opinions and feelings in blog form. During the writing of Veiled Freedom and Freedom's Stand, I followed numerous blogs representing the worlds of all my main characters. Military and private security. Humanitarian and state department. Afghan medical students and journalists.

An embassy security bash with those demining robots for which your tax dollars paid purloined and reprogrammed to serve drinks--all in living jpeg! A UN secretary's chronicle of daily life and romantic liaison with her Afghan driver--including a non-subtle advertisement of his upcoming availability when her contract is up. [No, I couldn't possibly make this stuff up!]

An Afghan journalist's frustrations and hopes for his nation--until he suddenly disappears from internet existence like so many other journalists under the Karzai regime. The frustration of being a female aid worker in a Muslim country. The pride of mission in a Special Forces medic saving an Afghan villager's life. The confusion and anger and curiosity about Western life of a Pakistani medical student.Living on the ground with your character counterparts can add details of daily life, personality, emotion, motivation that I can personally testify the best interview will not produce.

Research: And of course there is no substitute for just plain research. Before starting to write, before even traveling to Afghanistan, I literally saturated myself in the country. Histories, biographies, country studies, political commentary, regional literature, travelogues, I had easily read 30,000 pages material before I ever picked up a pen or computer keyboard. I kept a Google Alert to follow daily news happenings there. I explored Afghanistan's streets, food, art, culture, restaurants, hotels through such expatriate resources as Lonely Planet, Bradt, Essential Field Guides. I studied its setting through watching on-site films and documentaries. Here is just a small sampling of my bookshelf from this project alone:

Ghost Wars-The Secret History of the CIA, Afghanistan, and Bin Laden by Steve Coll, Charlie Wilson's War by George Crile, First In by Gary Schroen (the Pakistan CIA field agent who was first into Afghanistan after 9/11), Kabul Winter by Ann Jones, The Bookseller of Kabul by Asne Seierstad, Inside Afghanistan by John Weaver, Opium Season by Joel Hafvenstein, Prisoners of Hope by Dana Curry and Heather Mercer, The Sewing Circle of Herat by Christina Lamb, The Hunt for Bin Laden by Robin Moore, Three Cups of Tea by Greg Mortenson, Kite Runner and A Thousand Splendid Suns by Khaled Hosseini. Along with many, many others. Empathy: In the end, there's no substitute for empathy with a country, culture, and people group to bring it alive on page. And that can't be taught. I have personally learned empathy in part by walking the streets of more than thirty countries on five continents, getting to know and love people from countless different backgrounds, listening to their viewpoints, identifying with their pain, burning with their injustices. And coming to see through their eyes as well the beauty in very different landscapes, cultural practices, social styles than my own.

But some of the best novelists I know have such a natural gift of empathy, they bring foreign places alive without ever leaving home [check out ICFW member Kathi Macias' international fiction titles like No Greater Love and People of the Book for a great example]. Bottom line, empathy with others learned in any circumstance and background can be applied to any setting with enough good research.

And for that, just follow the tips given above.

Wednesday, May 25, 2011

The benefits of being a Christian author

Many times over the past few years since I began writing my novels, I have stopped and thanked God for the privilege of doing something I absolutely love. Being an author and speaker feels a perfect fit to me – something I think I was born to be. Yes, there have been difficult and torturous times when I wondered if I would ever be able to craft my current work in progress into something that would even approach being readable and if those novels in my head would ever be published. I still have my times of struggle, as I’m sure you all do too. But it’s my conviction that while we as Christian authors go through the same ups and downs as any other author, we have much greater resources available to us to survive the whole journey than those who do not have any faith in God.


I don’t mean that in any sort of self-righteous or smug way, but I’m so thankful God has been faithfully there for me throughout my writing journey when I would have been tempted to despair and give up. I have met quite a number of authors who find it hard to stay afloat and not become moody and depressed when they suffer yet another rejection from a potential publisher or when their books don’t sell well or when they don’t win that particular competition or award. Of course those things devastate us as Christian authors too. But we have a resource beyond ourselves to turn to – someone who understands rejection, who loves us unconditionally, who will still be here long after all the books on this earth will have crumbled into dust. We might be deeply discouraged, but we have God’s Holy Spirit, the ‘Encourager’ within us, comforting us and urging us on. As Paul puts it in 2 Corinthians 4:7-9:

But we have this treasure in jars of clay to show that this all-surpassing power is from God and not from us. We are hard pressed on every side, but not crushed; perplexed, but not in despair; persecuted, but not abandoned; struck down but not destroyed.


I have also found it so encouraging that when those negative messages pound away in my brain, telling me my books will never really make it and I might as well not waste my time, I can stand firm, knowing God clearly called me to write. It was not just my idea. Sure it was something I had always wanted to do, but around eight years ago, God made it very clear, through a specific bible passage at a turning point in my life, that this was his desire for me at that stage. I therefore launched into writing with much greater confidence and experienced God’s close presence and affirmation throughout the writing of my first novel. God was in it all with me – and that was so reassuring.


And God is still in it with me now, as I approach the release of my fifth novel. When I wonder if I can keep going and tire a little of looking for every opportunity to promote my books and get out there and speak, he reminds me that it’s not all about me. God has gifted me for a purpose – and that is to use my gifts while I can to point others to him and bring him honour and glory. It’s not all about how many books I can sell. It’s not all about what makes me look good or becoming famous or making lots of money. My writing is definitely fulfilling for me personally, but it has a much larger purpose too – and that inspires me above all to keep going and not give up.


God understands. God calls. God enables. Surely we are of all authors most blessed?

Jo-Anne Berthelsen grew up in Brisbane and holds an Arts degree from Queensland University. She has also studied Education and Theology and has worked as a high school teacher and editor, as well as in local church ministry in Sydney. Jo-Anne loves communicating through both the written and spoken word and currently has four published novels – ‘Heléna’, ‘All the Days of My Life’, ‘Laura’ and ‘Jenna’. She is married to a retired minister and has three grown-up children and two grandchildren. For more information or to contact Jo-Anne, please visit her website, www.jo-anneberthelsen.com.

Tuesday, May 24, 2011

Is Your Soup Staring at You?

A young Brazilian friend, filling up on
rice and beans at lunch.
There was a chicken head in my soup.   Between the grains of rice and bits of tomato and parsley floating in the yellow broth, his unblinking eye looked up at me. While a chicken staring from the soup was no doubt perfectly normal to the Brazilian family at the next table, it was somewhat disconcerting to me, an American missionary. (My husband across the table pushed aside the clawed foot that reached for the sky from his own bowl.)

What do your characters eat? People in different places enjoy different foods. A hard boiled egg, aged to a mottled purple, brought back delightful childhood memories to my Chinese friend while I made it a point to breathe through my mouth. My friend assured me that what gets called “century eggs” these days weren’t really that old.  “Probably no more than forty.”

Century eggs
Foods are always an important part of culture.  If you are writing about another country, researching local foods is important. Within a country as large as the US, regional differences may give your writing authenticity or make it obvious to the reader that this writer doesn’t really know and thus invalidate your whole story.

For those of you living outside the US, making us smell and taste your foods in your writing (and creating the same emotional response you would have to it), is a good way to draw an American audience into your character’s world.  There is nothing like a Christmas cookout/braai/barbie at the beach to let your readers know they are not in Kansas.

Food preparation plays an important role in women’s socialization in many cultures. I once watched a Mozambican woman glide gracefully across our churchyard with a five-gallon kerosene can of water balanced on her head. Her arms swung easily at her sides, and she never spilled a drop. A little girl of about eight followed with a restaurant-size butter tin of water on her head, held with one hand. Behind the little girl came a toddler, clutching a soup can to her head with both hands. Water sloshed out at every step.

Me, trying my hand stamping grain in tandem
with the ladies at a church conference
Mozambican women spend hours stamping, winnowing and grinding grain to prepare the staple mealie porridge (hard corn meal mush to my Southern US friends). It is a daily activity for traditional Africans. Clusters of women gather in back yards to chat while they work. And if it is a conference, there will be a dozen women or more sharing tasks around several wood fires that give the food that smoky flavor I can’t replicate on the kitchen stove. An urban African woman with a fulltime job outside the home may well grab a bag of dry mealie flour at the supermarket, but she will undoubtedly lament that although it is quick, it doesn’t taste as good. And she will miss the socializing around the huge log mortars that she remembers from her childhood.

Food preparation can provide a background activity while your characters carry on a conversation that reveals character or moves your plot forward.  The preparation itself will give readers insights into the setting. The way a character wields a knife, pounds a chicken breast, or responds to a spilled glass of milk can demonstrate aspects of your characterization. (I once heard a lecture that defined spiritual gifts based on response to spilled milk. The giver says, “Don’t worry; there’s plenty more,” and jumps up to refill the glass. The helper grabs a cloth and mops up the spill. The encourager says, “That’s all right; I know you didn’t mean to spill it.” A teacher like me irritates her kids by saying, “Next time set your glass further back from the edge so you don’t bump it with your elbow.”)

Brazilian "salgadinhos" ready for a party
My teen novel Between Two Worlds includes a scene of food preparation for Brazilian-born Cristina’s longed-for fifteenth birthday party. In that scene I show the different reactions of characters to such a non-American event.  I was also able to bring out differences and similarities (pizza!) to a typical American teen party in a natural way.

So how have you used food in your writing?

If I were to write about your region, what are some foods or food-related activities I should mention to make my story sound authentic?


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LeAnne Hardy has lived in six countries on four continents. Her books for young people come out of her cross-cultural experiences and her passion to use story to convey spiritual truths in a form that will impact lives. You can find out more about her books and travel adventures on her website and blog.


Sunday, May 22, 2011

SUNDAY EDITION


Coming Up This Week

Monday

Harry Kraus

Tuesday

LeAnne Hardy: Is Your Soup Staring at You?

Wednesday

J0-Anne Berthelsen: The benefits of being a Christian author

Thursday

Jeanette Windle

Friday Devotion

Shirley Corder: Instant Messaging

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Contest Giveaway Winners

karenk is the winner of Christine Lindsay's book, Shadowed in Silk (Ruth Ann's post, May 16)

Congratulations Karen!

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News

Marcia Lee Laycock's new devotional e-book for writers, Abundant Rain, is now available to download at Smashwords http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/58017
Abundant Rain is a collection of devotionals written over the past few years for Novel Journey www.noveljourney.blogspot.com

Lisa Harris' book, Blood Ransom, is a 2011 Christy Award nominee in the Contemporary Romance category - congrats Lisa!

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New Book Releases

Mary Hawkins' contemporary set in Australia, Justice at Baragula, Book Three in the Baragula series, is a May 2011 release from Ark House Press.

Christine Lindsay's historical set in India circa 1919, Shadowed in Silk, is a May 2011 release in e-book format and a September 2011 release in print format from Whitefire Publishing.

Jeanette Windle's contemporary set in Afghanistan, Freedom's Stand, the sequel to Veiled Freedom, is a May 2011 release from Tyndale.

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Upcoming Book Releases

Jo-Anne Berthelsen's book, Helena's Legacy, will be a June 2011 release from Ark House Press.

Nick Daniels' thriller set in the Middle East, The Jihad's Messiah, Book 1 in the Jihad series, will be a September 2011 release from Risen Books.

Rita Galieh's book, Signed, Sealed and Delivered, will be a September 2011 release from Ark House Press.

Kathi Macias has a Freedom series involving human trafficking coming soon from New Hope Publishers. Deliver Me from Evil (September 2011) is set in San Diego, CA. and the Golden Triangle area of Thailand; Special Delivery (January 2012); The Deliverer (April 2012).

Kathi Macias' Christmas themed book, A Christmas Journey Home, set in Arizona and Ensenada, Mexico, will be an October 2011 release from New Hope Publishers.

To find more International Christian Fiction books, please visit our Recent Releases page, Backlist Titles page and our International Christian Fiction wiki.

Friday, May 20, 2011

DEVOTION: A Few Good Questions - Marcia Lee Laycock

A writer/editor I greatly respect wrote: “We need to keep our own fallibility very much in mind, adopting a humble posture towards the readers we serve and God, whom we seek to honour.” Doug Koop, editor, Christian Week Newspaper

Mr. Koop says there are some questions we need to ask ourselves, as writers – “Do they (our words) encourage better attitudes? Do they inspire better activity? Do they edify? Do they entertain? Do they strengthen the right muscles? Do they inform truthfully and graciously? Do they honour Jesus Christ and the Church He loves? Those kinds of questions matter …”

As I read his column, it gave me pause. Can I put a check mark beside each of those questions when I consider my work? I would hope so. I think Mr. Koop has encapsulated what it means to be a writer who is Christian, both in terms of motivation and practise.

It is a high calling, one not to be taken lightly, one not to be used to grow our own egos but to act as the conduit for God’s purposes. He has purposes for our words – purposes that involve people we may never meet - a young woman who needs emotional healing, a young man who needs to deal with his anger, an elderly woman who needs to forgive, an elderly man who just needs a good laugh. Our words, used to God’s purposes, can affect change in the lives of our readers. All we have to do is choose them wisely, put them together and then get out of the way.

All we have to do is respect our readers enough to work hard at finding the right words, praying they will understand and act upon the words we write, and honour God enough to acknowledge His sovereignty as He does with them what he will.

For “of this gospel I was appointed a herald” (2 Timothy 1:11)





Marcia Lee Laycock’s inspirational writing has won awards in both Canada and the U.S.  Her devotionals are distributed to thousands and her novel, One Smooth Stone, won the Best New Canadian Christian Author Award in 2006. Marcia is also a sought-after speaker for women’s events. Visit her at www.vinemarc.com