Friday, April 30, 2010

What makes you buy a book? Part 2


Thanks so much to all of you who participated in my poll! As I said in my last post, as I work to promote Blood Ransom, primarily on the web, I am trying to see what types of promotion works the best. So that brought me to ask the question, what is it that catches our eye as a reader so we're willing to buy that one book out of the thousands that are for sale out there.

*Out of the thirty-eight people who voted, twenty-eight said that it was the author that compelled them to buy a book.

*Second, at twenty-six votes, was the back cover blurb.

*Coming in at a close third, with twenty votes, was word of mouth.

*The other significant vote was the cover art at 15 votes. It's worth mentioning as well, that online/newspaper reviews was next in line with 10 votes, which ties in closely with word of mouth.

Where we live, the nearest bookstore is several hundred miles away and the mail isn't reliable enough to have things sent to us, so when I do have a chance to buy books (often when we are back in the States with limited luggage), I have to choose carefully. For me, I definitely agree with the top three choices, though the back cover blurb and word of mouth/online reviews are probably even more important to me than the author. There are some authors that I like to read all their books, but I'm also always interested in finding a new voice in my favorite genres.

What about you? Were you surprised with the answers or did you agree with them? Let me know what you think!

Lisa
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Lisa Harris is an award-winning author of twenty novels and novellas. She lives with her husband and their three children in Mozambique, Africa, where they work as missionaries. When she’s not busy writing or home schooling, she loves traveling, cooking different ethnic foods, and going on game drives through the African bush.

Visit her website or her blog for information on Blood Ransom--that releases this month, and all her books.

Thursday, April 29, 2010

Interview with DiAnn Mills and book giveaway

Narelle here. I’m thrilled to welcome DiAnn Mills to our blog. Today we’re giving away a copy of DiAnn’s April release, Sworn to Protect.

Award-winning author DiAnn Mills launched her career in 1998 with the publication of her first book. Currently she has fifty books in print and has sold 1.5 million copies.

DiAnn believes her readers should “Expect an Adventure.” DiAnn Mills is a fiction writer who combines an adventuresome spirit with unforgettable characters to create action-packed novels.

Six of her titles have appeared on the CBA Bestseller List. Three of her books have won the distinction of Best Historical of the Year by Heartsong Presents. Five of her books have won placements through American Christian Fiction Writer’s Book of the Year Awards 2003 – 2008, and she is the recipient of the Inspirational Reader’s Choice award for 2005 and 2007. She was a Christy Awards finalist in 2008.

DiAnn is a founding board member for American Christian Fiction Writers, a member of Inspirational Writers Alive, Romance Writers of America’s Faith, Hope and Love, and Advanced Writers and Speakers Association. She speaks to various groups and teaches writing workshops around the country. DiAnn is also a mentor for Jerry B. Jenkins Christian Writer’s Guild.

She and her husband live in sunny Houston, Texas. They have four adult sons and are active members of Metropolitan Baptist Church.

Website: www.diannmills.com

Narelle: In Sworn to Protect, Danika Morales is a Border Patrol Agent. What drives her passion for her job with the Texas Border Patrol?

DiAnn: Danika became interested in the immigration process during her college years. Her decision came after volunteering at a mission and seeing how gangs from South America persecuted Americans and illegal immigrants. She saw the controversy and heated debates and concluded that US laws were to be enforced until the laws were changed to help the less fortunate.

Narelle: How tough is it for women who work on the front line as Border Patrol Agents? How does Danika cope with her demanding job?

DiAnn: Women more so than men have to prove their mettle. Although women experience the same training and continuous testing of skills, many of the men want to see a woman agent perform in the line of duty before they not only feel safe with a woman agent but respect her as a professional.

Danika has proven her abilities and is an accepted Border Patrol Agent. She faces danger with the knowledge that she's been trained to handle critical situations.

Narelle: Human smuggling receives international media attention. In Australia, maritime security is an area of focus for our border protection. Boat loads of asylum seekers make the treacherous journey toward the remote North Western Australia coast. Please share with us the unique challenges your characters in Sworn to Protect face as they patrol the US-Mexican border.

DiAnn: The biggest challenge is putting aside personal sentiments for hard working people who are seeking a better way of life versus those who are gang members smuggling drugs, weapons, illegal entry etc. Danika's problem in Sworn to Protect is that someone within the ranks of the Border Patrol is giving the illegals classified information that allows them to cross US borders undetected.

Narelle: Human smuggling and the plight of asylum seekers is also a humanitarian issue. Do the residents in Danika’s home town have different perspectives on this issue and does this create conflict in your story?

DiAnn: Absolutely! Danika, as well as other agents, often change into their uniform at the station so neighbors and others do not know their profession. Often children are not told what their parent does to earn a living. Family and friends live on both sides of the border.

Narelle: Sworn to Protect is the second book in your Call of Duty series. Please tell us about the other books in the series.

DiAnn: Breach of Trust is about a CIA operative posing as a librarian in a small town in Oklahoma. She is forced to make a decision of bringing a corrupt politician to justice or endangering the lives of those she loves. The reality is who can she trust, and the one man she loves may be the enemy.

Pursuit of Justice is about an FBI agent who is sent to West Texas, her former home, to help solve a series of murders surrounding an over three hundred year old legend about hidden Spanish treasure. She finds the killer may be her own father, and the once prime suspect has stolen into her heart.


DiAnn, thanks for joining us today. I really enjoyed reading Breach of Trust and the story kept me up until 2am because I had to find out what happened next! Breach of Trust is also a Romance Writers of America 2010 RITA® finalist in the inspirational category - congratulations DiAnn! I’m looking forward to reading Sworn to Protect.

By commenting on today’s post you can enter the drawing to win a copy of Sworn to Protect. The drawing will take place on Friday, May 7 and the winner announced on Sunday, May 9. Please leave an email address [ ] at [ ] dot [ ] where you can be reached.

"Void where prohibited; the odds of winning depend on the number of entrants. Entering the giveaway is considered a confirmation of eligibility on behalf of the enterer in accord with these rules and any pertaining local/federal/international laws."

To learn more about DiAnn Mills and her books, please visit her website.


Narelle Atkins writes contemporary inspirational romance. She resides in Canberra, Australia with her husband and children. She can also be found around the inkwell at the Inkwell Inspirations blog. To learn more about Narelle, please visit her website.

Tuesday, April 27, 2010

Africa in Picture Books by LeAnne Hardy





Every day is an adventure for young children exploring their world.  Stories set in other cultures can introduce curious children to the world beyond their own doorstep.  It might be a story about an ethnic community in their own country, or about children on the far side of the world.

A good story starts with something with which the reader can identify, and moves on to something new that stretches a child’s thinking.  Picture books illustrate the culture visually at the same time that the text invites the child to identify with children whose lives may be very different.

My own children grew up in Africa.  Over the years we have collected books that show the African experience in positive ways.  In this blog I would like to share favorite picture books of Africa.  In a future blog I will share juvenile fiction that can give an older child a feel for African life.

In the comments section, I would love to hear your thoughts on these books and recommendations of others for introducing young children to African culture.

Alphabet and counting books:

Ashanti to Zulu; African Traditions by Margaret Musgrove, illustrated by Leo and Diane Dillon (1976).  New York, Dial.
                        Beautiful, if somewhat idealized, illustrations represent twenty-six African cultures with brief paragraphs of text in this Caldecott Award winner.

From Akebu to Zapotec; a Book of Bibleless Peoples, by June Hathersmith; illustrations by Alice Roder (2002).  Orlando, Wycliffe Bible Translators.
                        Twenty-six ethnic groups that lack the Bible in their language are featured with colorful illustrations and short accounts of their culture, emphasizing what it is like to be a child in that group.   A map of the world locates each tribe.  Like it’s companion book From Arapesh to Zuni, this makes a great prayer guide for family worship.

Jambo Means Hello; a Swahili Alphabet Book by Muriel Feelings, illustrated by Tom Feelings (1974).    New York, Dial.
                        Soft black ink and white tempera illustrations accompany a Swahili word and cultural information for every letter of the alphabet.

We All Went on Safari; a Counting Journey through Tanzania  by Laurie Krebs, illustrated by Julia Cairns (2003).  Cambridge, MA, Barefoot.
                        Spend a day with a Maasai clan in their bright red wraps as they count African animals.  Additional pages give information about the animals and the Maasai culture of Tanzania.

Emeka’s Gift; an African Counting Story, by Ifeoma Onyefulu (1995).  London, Francis Lincoln.
                        This book works on a variety of levels: a simple counting book, a pleasant story about a boy searching for a gift for his grandmother, and an introduction to Nigerian culture. The colorful photographs will appeal to both African and non-African readers.  Sidebars contain additional cultural information.

Stories of African children:

Bringing the Rain to Kapiti Plain; a Nandi Tale by Verna Aardmea, illustrated by Beatiz Vidal (1981).    New York, Dial.
                        This cumulative rhyme in the tradition of “The House that Jack Built” tells how a Kenyan herdsman caused the rains to begin.  The text sings.

Fire on the Mountain by Jane Kurtz, illustrated by E. B. Lewis (1994).  New York, Simon and Schuster.
                        This story of a clever young shepherd boy and his sister outwitting a dishonest rich man is a retelling of a traditional tale.  The illustrations give an authentic glimpse of the rich culture of Ethiopia where the author grew up.

Goal! By Mina Javaherbin (2010)  Candlewick.
South African township kids have to protect their regulation soccer ball (football, as it is called locally) from bullies in order to feel the freedom of play. The artist uses perspective to give variety to what could have been a drab slum setting.

Handa’s Surprise by Eileen Brown (1994).  Candlewick.
Handa prepares a basket of fruit to take to her friend in a neighboring Kenyan village, but unseen by Handa, various animals steal the fruit before a goat butts a tree and refills Handa's basket with something unexpected.

Limpopo Lullaby by Jane Jolly, illustrated by Dee Huxley (2006).   Simple Read Books.
                        My grown children will identify with Leroy and Aimee for there was nothing they enjoyed more when the long Mozambican dry season ended than to play in the rain. But in this story the rain doesn't stop and the children must be rescued by helicopter.  Delightful pastel illustrations with expressive faces. Based on actual events in 2000, this could be frightening or confusing to very young children.

The Most Important Gift of All by David Conway, illustrated by Karin Littlewood (2006)
                        Lovely watercolors of African village life.  Ama goes looking for the important gift called 'love' to give her new baby brother and finds it when her father comes looking for her.

Muktar and the Camels by Janet Graber (2009).  Holt.
                        A Somali orphan in a Kenyan orphanage dreams of the nomadic life with camels he has lost until the "Bookmobile" arrives on the backs of three camels.  Beautiful pictures and satisfying ending.

Mufaro’s Beautiful Daughters by John Steptoe (1987).  New York, Lothrop, Lee and Shepherd.
                        Two sisters with different temperaments travel to the capital, each hoping to be chosen as the king’s wife.  Spectacular illustrations show the well-known ruins of Great Zimbabwe as the site of the king’s city.

So That’s What God is Like by LeAnne Hardy, illustrated by Janet Wilson (2004).  Grand Rapids, Kregel.
                        Janet Wilson’s beautiful paintings bordered in the style of Zulu beadwork illuminate my text about Biblical images of God and show off the African cultural setting.

When Africa Was Home by Karen Lynn Williams, illustrated by Floyd Cooper (1991).  New York, Orchard.
                        My own daughters strongly identified with this book about a family missing Africa when they have returned to the United States.

So what books do you recommend for introducing young children to African culture?





LeAnne Hardy is the author of six books for children and young adults, set in a variety of cultures.  She lists many more books about Africa on her Goodreads site.

Monday, April 26, 2010

Mixed Emotions



In less than 50 days, South Africa will be the first African nation to host the FIFA World Cup in Soccer (Football). Many of the matches are already booked to capacity. The stadiums will be full of screaming, cheering fans. Because it's South Africa, there will be thousands of vuvuzelas bellowing out to add to the cacophony. 
(A vuvuzela is a plastic trumpet-like instrument, about a meter long that South African fans blow at soccer games.)
These spectators won't be sitting quietly watching the match, they'll be going wild. They're not scared to express their emotions.

Recently, the Mighty Men conference hosted 300,000 men to a week-end long rally on a farm in KwaZulu Natal. The men travelled from all over South Africa.


They stayed in their own tents, miles from the "preaching area". This photo shows them during a time of worship. (Photo taken from the middle of the crowd! There were just as many behind.) They clearly weren't scared of emotions.  


On Friday, Daniella spoke of how our emotions can influence our writing. Then on Saturday, Harry spoke of the need to reign in our lives and not be ruled by outside circumstances or emotions. Today, I want to take this unintentional theme one step further.

How does what we read or write influence our emotions? Both gave me problems this past week.

As a reader: The other night, I couldn't get to sleep because I'd been reading Face, by Angela Hunt. (Excellent read by the way.) I eventually knew I had to get to sleep, so put the book down at the end of a chapter. Stupidly, it was also the middle of a scary part of the story. Eventually, I had to get up, heat myself some milk, put on a flashlight and climb under the blankets. (No, I wasn’t hiding so my mother didn’t find me reading. I was trying not to wake my husband.) After I read past that section, I could get to sleep. I had been so caught up in the emotions created by the story, my mind couldn't switch off.

As a writer: For several days, I struggled with a section of a non-fiction chapter due to go to an agent. My critique partners had returned the chapter with comments such as, "This is terrifying. I wouldn't read it if it applied to me." Yet there was a lesson for the reader further on in the chapter, if they ever managed to reach it. If I took the section out, there would be no point in the rest of the chapter. But did I want to create negative emotions in someone who was already battling with health issues? My own emotions went in a spin. Should I water the story down? Or do I owe it to my reader to tell the truth?

We all know about the mind/body connection. It is medically recognized that emotions affect our health. Too much stress leads to high blood pressure and ulcers.

Since childhood, I have absorbed emotions from stories. Whether I read the story, or watch it on film, I become engrossed in the lives of the characters. Romantic films make me warm towards my husband. Films with an unhappy twist leave me disgruntled and wishing I hadn't wasted the time watching them. Thrillers have me sitting up wide-eyed at night, drinking warm milk and wishing I'd had more self-control. 

Often when I do manage to fall asleep after reading a gripping story, I continue to live the story in my dreams. Why, even Harry Potter had me doing battle on broomsticks. Stories where the hero/heroine is encouraging, like Finding Forrester, leave me wanting to do something grand and leave a mark on the world.

Many people, with stronger constitutions than I have, love thrillers, the more gory the better. Their hearts pound and their mouths turn dry as they leaf through the pages as fast as their eyes can take in the words. When they finish the book, they'll say, "What a wonderful read." Yet if the same events happened in their lives, they'd describe it as "the worst time of my life." What’s the difference? It’s simple. We can put the book down. We can make ourselves a cup of coffee during the advertisements. We can control the strength of our emotion.

For a fulfilling life, we need to experience the full range of emotions. If we never experienced fear, how would we recognize calm? If we didn’t ever get angry, we wouldn’t learn control. The key is to keep moving on. As a reader, we trust the writer to give us calm periods where we can catch our breath (or go to sleep!) Even Paul warned us, “Do not let the sun go down while you are still angry.” (Ephesians 4:26 NIV)

As a reader, I need to choose my books so that they will create positive emotions for me, especially at bedtime. When I'm awake, I can take deliberate steps to overcome negative feelings. But when my mind slips out of gear and into Slumberland, I lose that control. So if I want to be healthy and happy, I need to be selective of what I read and when.

How about us as writers? Are there ways we can influence our readers to think clearer, live better, be healthier? Surely as Christian writers, we have an exciting responsibility to help our readers experience emotions—the full range of emotions. Let’s excite them, scare them, bring tears to their eyes. But let’s be sure we leave them with emotions that will make them want to come back. Let’s give them emotions that will leave them better people. It's a powerful challenge.

Jonatan MÃ¥rtensson said: "Feelings are much like waves, we can’t stop them from coming but we can choose which one to surf.” He has a point. I need to avoid the thriller type waves, especially at night. But what sort of waves should I look for? 

As writers, we need to weave in the happy emotions as well as the negative. We want to increase our readers’ heart rates and metabolism. But we want to leave them feeling good about themselves. And as readers, we need to choose which waves we will surf. Especially last thing at night.

What about you? Have you ever read a book that affected your actions in a positive or negative way? Tell us about it.


SHIRLEY M. CORDER can be contacted through her website or you can follow her on Twitter.

Sunday, April 25, 2010

SUNDAY EDITION

We're changing our blog posting cycle and Saturday will now be reserved for special events. Starting in May, we are introducing a regular Friday Devotions post. Please check the SUNDAY EDITION to find out what's happening on our blog.

Coming Up This Week

Monday

Shirley Corder: Mixed Emotions

Tuesday

LeAnne Hardy: Africa in Picture Books

Thursday

Narelle Atkins: Interview with DiAnn Mills and book giveaway

Friday

Lisa Harris: What makes you buy a book? Part 2

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Contest Giveaway Winners

Shirley Corder is the winner of Jo-Anne Berthelsen's book, Helena (from Mary's post, April 9).

Congratulations Shirley!

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News

Lisa Harris' thriller set in Africa, Blood Ransom, is an April 2010 release from Zondervan.

Harry Kraus' book, The Six-Liter Club, is an April 2010 release from Howard Books.

Jeanette Windle's book, Veiled Freedom (Tyndale) is a 2010 ECPA Christian Book Award finalist in the fiction category - congratulations Jeanette!

Grace Bridges' short story, Fungus Among Us, premieres this month at the ezine The Cross and the Cosmos, and is available free at http://crossandcosmos.com/

Narelle Atkins is posting on the Inkwell Inspirations blog on Wednesday. The theme for the week is 'An Inky in TV Land' and Narelle's post is titled: My Kitchen Rules - Who Rules Your Life?

Saturday, April 24, 2010

Reigning in Life


Earlier this week, I traveled back from Chicago with a layover in Philadelphia. After sampling a famous Phillie Cheese Steak, I opened my Bible and waited for my flight. A verse in Romans resonated with me and I began to commit it to memory.

“If because of one man’s trespass, death reigned through that one man, much more will those who receive the abundance of grace and the free gift of righteousness reign in life through the one man, Jesus Christ.” Romans 5:17

I thought about the concept of reigning. That certainly implies an element of victory, not being ruled by outside circumstances or emotions. Naturally, my thoughts eventually turned to my characters and if and how they exemplify this concept of “reigning in life.”

Do your characters speak to you?

I ran across a quote this week: "Many people hear voices when no one is there. Some of them are called 'mad' and are shut up in rooms where they stare at the walls all day. Others are called 'writers' and they do pretty much the same thing." Meg Chittenden

I (and many of the authors on this blog) try to create characters who are real. Flawed. Struggling with sin and difficult circumstances. Often ruled by negative emotions. But what has been a characteristic feature of my stories is the impact of grace, the love of God lavished on my protagonist not based on personal merit (that would be wages, not grace).

In every novel, the protagonist encounters a significant obstacle to a goal, setting up a large enough conflict to carry the story (and our reader’s interest) for the 300-400 plus pages of the book. As a result of this conflict, the protagonist changes. This change is known as the “character arc.” The story resolves after the climax and we find our protagonist stronger with a new insight. Growth and balance have been achieved.

Along the way, I like to introduce my protagonist to grace. Often this concept will be contrasted to their own bend towards a performance-based self-acceptance. The protagonist is likely a very strong person who has worked hard and feels their success and worth are determined by their own hard work. Encountering grace in this setting is a paradigm bender!

Let’s go back to the verse. It says that those who encounter the abundance of grace will reign in life. Wow. That is a challenge to me. Am I reigning in life? Or am I letting circumstances or emotions reign?

And it gave me a new way of thinking about my protagonist’s character arc. He or she begins the story and quickly are plunged into trouble (if this doesn’t happen on page one, there had better be a good reason!). In the beginning, the protagonist is definitely not “reigning in life.” Past issues need resolution and are blocking personal growth, someone’s life is at stake, emotions rule and hope is fading. Step two: the protagonist encounters the abundance of grace. Step three, the climax: the protagonist overcomes the obstacle and the inner change mirrors the victory over the outward conflict. In the end, my character ends up on a different plane. Growth has occurred and in some way, in an area they previously struggled, he or she now reigns.

Back to you and me. We have received the abundance of grace that Paul talked about, have we not? So are we “reigning in life”?

Or not?

If not, why not?

It’s a challenge to me, and something I hope you’ll let simmer in your own life.

As for me, I’m off early, leaving the house at four a.m., bound for another airport. Destination: Atlanta. I’ll be at the book club that meets at the North Metro First Baptist Church on 4/24 at 2 pm, on WATC “Friends and Neighbors” show at noon on 4/26 and at the Lifeway store at the Mall of Georgia Crossing in Buford, GA from 7:30 to 9 pm on 4/26. Please come out and cheer me on. I’d love to meet some Atlanta area readers.

A chance to talk about writing and books, what fun.

And another chance to open my Bible in an airport and see what inspiration follows…

Harry

Friday, April 23, 2010

The Emotion of Writing

I've been working on my making major changes to my first novel for a few months. As far as I was concerned the manuscript was complete and perfect as at September last year. But I re-learned that there is always more to learn and a story can always be improved at the last ACFW conference.
I also learned that (for me anyway)the creative process of writing is far more enjoyable than the technical business of editing. What could have taken me a few months is now taking a lot longer. One of the big changes I've had to make is to make a secondary male character female. Not easy. Especially since I'd grown to love this character for the man he was. So it's been painstaking, slow work - changing motivations, desires, character, looks and language.

One of the things that helped me get focused was a comment my fiance made in passing. He said something to the effect of me not writing as much and not being motivated. That made me think, "I'll show him who's not motivated." Yes, I know not very Christian, but it lit a fire under me and the more I wrote, the more I started to fall in love with my revised story. But as sometimes happens in life, I got a bad blow a few weeks later.

A very important relationship was severed (thank God it was only temporarily, but I didn't know this at the time). I completely lost the zeal to do anything, let alone write. I spent my days just trying to breathe. I would go from hope to despair in a matter of minutes. For days I couldn't write. Praise God, the relationship was restored, but this led me to reflect on the effect of our emotions on our craft.

The following is a quote from the National Writing Project website that describes three typical situations that arise from the struggle between feelings and professionalism: when strong emotions interfere with balance and clarity; when writers leave their personal experience out of their writing; and when unresolved feelings cause a writer to lose sight of audience and purpose." Hmm.

As Christians sometimes we get so 'spiritual' that we lose sight of the truth that God gave us emotions. Obviously they are not supposed to lead us, but to help us get a sense of where we are in relation to the circumstances surrounding us. So how can our emotions help us with our writing? I cant say that I have 'the' answer or that there is even 'an' answer, but I did ask myself the following questions:
-Have you ever been so angry that you kill of a character because they remind you of some one who's hurt you even though that was not originally part of your story?
-Have you found yourself disliking a character you previously loved because of something that did that was recently done to you?
-Have you given a happy ending to a story just because things were going brilliantly in your life?

There are so many more questions we could possibly ask, but what I realised is that I have a choice. I can either channel my emotions into creativity without making impulsive and unnecessary changes to my story outline or I can let my emotions rule me and have me going back and forth based on how fickle they are. God help me!
I'm going to go over what I've written over the past month with a critical eye and see how my emotions affected my work.

Thursday, April 22, 2010

Just Do It!

I am often asked how I began my writing journey towards being a published author, as though armed with that knowledge, the supplicant could simply replicate the process and accomplish the same. Like everything else about my life, I cannot really recommend my own path as typical. The truth is, I wrote my first book out of sheer boredom.

My husband and I were the only expatriates at the time in a southern Bolivia city, working with a Christian ministry organization. While my husband traveled the Andes mountains two weeks at a time, I was stuck at home with three preschoolers, no car, no TV, no radio. Once my preschoolers were in bed, I had only the handful of English-language books I’d read dozens of times. I finally decided if I had nothing to read, I’d write a book instead. Stories scribbled while my babies slept became Kathy and the Redhead, a children’s novel based on my growing-up adventures at a missionary kids boarding school.

Like most writers, you will find the path to writing success a very individual journey. But there are a few strategies that can help maximize those possibilities:

1. Just do it!

I couldn’t say how many people over the years have confided in me their ambition to write a book. Many have carried a particular book idea around for years. They don’t want to share that idea because someone might steal it. I'm often asked if they should copyright it. [NEWSFLASH: Ideas are not copyrightable! If you’ve had one, be sure someone else has had the same]. Invariably, these idea-hoarders are bursting to let me in on their secret--so long as I promise not to steal it. Be sure once I’ve heard it, I’ve yet to be tempted!

The only way to write a book, an article, a short story, a poem . . . is to stop talking, sit down, and do it!

Which brings me to the second strategy.

2. Discipline--be persistent!

How does one sit down and write that book? By writing the first page, then the second and on to the third until the book is finished. Plenty of people start books. Too few finish them. The persistence to keep on going, no matter how far away that finished goal seems, day after day, page after page, is what makes a writer, not a great book idea.

Having written now fourteen novels, three of approximately 250,000 words, I’ve learned not to even think of how much remains of the project—it is too discouraging to look 18 months down the road—but just of the next scene, the next chapter. As I discipline myself to do this day after day after day, fourteen times now I’ve had the pleasure of suddenly realizing that I’ve written the last paragraph and can scribble ‘The End’ at the bottom of the page.

The difference between the successful writer and the drop-out is not their talent, but their persistence.

3. Write what you know.

A protagonist peeling off a parka in the middle of the Amazon. An experienced archeological team in the Peruvian Andes leaving an Inca find-of-the century unguarded to go eat supper (and then displaying horror that their find is stolen!). A Colombian drug lord choosing a backwoods English village for an operating base (because the author is from that village, making it easy to describe), instead of Miami, Rio, or anywhere with a swinging night life. All these tell me that the writer whose manuscript I’m reading hasn’t the smallest personal knowledge of the settings they’ve chosen to write about.

Your writing can only breathe reality and authenticity if you know what you’re writing about.

4. Don’t stop there . . . always pursue new knowledge.

On the other hand, what's the fun in limiting settings and plot lines to one's own personal experience! I’ve kicked around some of the planet's wilder settings, which is a wonderful advantage as a suspense novelist, if not so comfortable in real life. But I also research thoroughly enough to put the pieces of what I dig up together with what I already know on the ground and extrapolate--well, let's just say, intel some government agencies figure I shouldn’t know!

I never stop learning. Everything I hear, read, experience, research for a writing project gets filed into my mental data banks. You want to know about Guarani ethnomusicology, Mennonite history, the unparalleled brutality of the French in their colonies, I can pull out the stats. If I can see no present use for that data once the project involved is over, be sure that someday it will crawl into the pages of some other book I write.

5. Listen to editors.

Editors are smarter than you think. If they tell you something isn’t good enough, don’t run out to self-publish. Start rewriting!!

I would not be where I am today if it weren't for editors who took time to tell me where I was going wrong even while rejecting my manuscript. Or if I hadn't taken their advice and plowed it back into rewrites. If nothing else, the editor knows what sells. So if they’re willing to take their time to give advice, a wise writer pays attention.

Too many quite talented writers never make it to print because they’re just too proud to submit their work to an expert critique or too lazy to go back and improve their rough draft.

In Conclusion (as my preacher husband would say):
One of my sons loves music, but as a teenager played no instruments, had never had a voice lesson, and to my ear at least could only just carry a tune. So I was astounded to find out he was now lead singer of the youth worship band. When I broached him diplomatically about his lack of any musical training or visible native ability, he informed me airily, “Oh, Mom, you don’t have to have talent any more to become a pop star!”

Since then he has been lead singer for countless ‘gigs’, including at Miami's Hard Rock Cafe. Confirming a long-held conviction of my own concerning my teens’ choice of music styles!

There is a truth, though, that it is not innate talent or grammatical skills that make a great writer, though those do help. Many with ample talent and fine writing skills will never write a book—because they never get around to it! Like the hare and tortoise of Aesop's fable, they will be passed along the path by the writer who perhaps doesn’t have Hemingway's genius, but has a passion to write that keeps them plugging along, writing, rewriting, tearing apart and putting back together. Each rewrite a little better until one day an editor takes a look at their work and says, "Hey, this is fabulous!" And suddenly (actually, make that many months later!) they find their byline on a printed page.

Bottom line, there's only one real strategy for writing.

Just Do It!

Wednesday, April 21, 2010

BOOKS, BOOKS, EVERYWHERE . . .

by Marion Ueckermann


One of the most fascinating places I visited when we lived in Ireland was the library at Trinity College in Dublin. It is the largest research library in Ireland, containing around 5 million printed volumes and a vast number of manuscripts, maps and music.

The most famous book in this amazing library is located in the Old Library. The Book of Kells, a 9th-century gospel manuscript celebrated for its lavish decoration and called the ‘most beautiful book in the world’, has worldwide fame. Containing the four Gospels in Latin based on a Vulgate text, this manuscript is written on vellum in a script known as “insular majuscule”. Thousands of rare and very early volumes have also found their home in the Old Library.

Upstairs from where the Book of Kells is kept on view with other manuscripts, is the magnificent Long Room built between 1712 and 1732. Around 200,000 antiquarian tomes, tucked inside 21alcoves, grace the double-storey oak bookcases in a 65 meter long (213 ft) by 12.8 meter (42 ft) wide chamber with wainscoting and ceiling of old Irish oak. The sight is staggering! When I stood in this grandiose room, staring up into the 12.6 meter high (41 ft) timber barrel vaulted ceiling, I heard my youngest son, aged 10, whisper beside me, “I want to come and study here one day.” Unfortunately, we returned to South Africa before that dream could become a reality.


A collection of 14 marble busts began in 1743 of the great philosophers and writers of the western world like Jonathan Swift. Today, 48 white heads of wisdom, eminent contributors to knowledge, line each side of the Long Room: Socrates, Homer, Plato, Demosthenes, Shakespeare, Bacon and Dean Swift to name but a few.

On this vellum manuscript seen on the left from the Book of Kells, are the opening words of St. John. I’d like to recount the true story of Jesus and the miraculous catch of fish from another part of John’s gospel, however.

In chapter 21, the risen Lord speaks to his disciples from the shore and tells them to throw their nets on the right side of the boat – they will find some fish there. Perhaps more a miracle than the catch was the fact that after a hard night’s work they still listened to the voice of a stranger on the beach, for they didn’t realize yet that it was Jesus. But maybe they were just tired of coming up empty-netted that they felt, “What the heck – one last cast can’t hurt . . .”

However, when the nets began to team with fish, they immediately realized only one person could know what lay beneath the depths of the sea – the One who had created it all. And Peter (don’t you just love him), true to his nature, plunges into the water, once again braving the waves to be with his Lord.

The writer ends the chapter stating that Jesus did many other things. But he felt that the world would not have room for all the books that would be written had all his miracles been documented.

Take a few moments to think of the bookshops and libraries in your immediate suburb. Think of the number of books stacked side by side in those places. Then think of these establishments in your city, and add the number of volumes they contain. Cast your mind even further afield to your country; and wider still, your continent. Then other continents; encompass the globe. Move to the ends of the earth – cyberspace. Amazon, Barnes & Noble, inter alia. It’s mind boggling to think of the myriad of books currently in print, resting on shelves, hiding in boxes, or stacked on floors. And the writer, John, suspects that the world would not have room to contain the books that would be written had all Jesus’ miracles been penned.

As a group of Christian fiction writers and readers, let’s focus on historical novels based on the miracles and life of Jesus Christ. I’ve listed a few that I know of, most gracing the very shelves of my study. I’ve grouped these under authors, placing in brackets what miracle or part of Jesus’ life the story is based on.

Why not take a trip to your own bookshelf, nearest bookstore or library, or even just down memory lane, and add to my list in the same manner in the comment section below? Let’s share what fascinating stories emanating from the life of Christ are out there for us to read.


Tracy Groot: (see Author Interview and Book Giveaway next month)

- The Brother’s Keeper 
(Tells the story of the latter part of Jesus’ ministry, up through his death and resurrection, as seen through the eyes of His own family.)

- Stones of My Accusers 
(Reveals the transforming difference Christ’s mercy makes through the lives of several compelling characters.)

- Madman 
(The story behind the Geresene demoniac of the gospels of Mark and Luke.)

Liz Curtis Higgs:

- Unveiling Mary Magdalene
(Modern day story closely paralleling the biblical account of Mary Magdalene. This book takes a Novel Approach to bible study. The fictional story is followed by study of Mary Magdalene and her life-changing encounters with Christ.)

Amy Deardon:

- A Lever Long Enough
(Travel back in time to first century Jerusalem to see if the Resurrection really happened.)

J Fletcher Ray:

- The Hand that Drove the Nails
(The story of the man who crucified Jesus.)

Gene Edwards:

- The Prisoner in the Third Cell
(A dramatic story of John the Baptist, imprisoned by Herod and awaiting death, struggles to understand a Lord who did not live up to his expectations.)

- The Day I was Crucified
(As told by Jesus the Christ.)

- The Divine Romance
(From the grandeur of Creation to the glorious union of the Savior and his bride, God's majestic love sweeps through time, space, and eternity in this greatest of all love stories.)

The Chronicles of the Door series (now titled The Chronicles of Heaven):
- The Beginning (Creation)
- The Escape (Exodus)
- The Birth (Christ’s birth)
- The Triumph (Christ’s betrayal and death)
- The Return (Christ’s return)

(I’ve listed even the Old Testament stories in the above series as they reveal the zenith of creation . . . the death and resurrection of Christ)
 




MARION UECKERMANN’s writing passion was sparked in 2001 when she moved to Ireland with her husband and two sons. Since then Marion has been honing her skills and has published some devotional articles in Winners at Work as well as inspirational poetry online and in a poetry journal. She has written her first Christian Women’s novel (unpublished) and is currently completing the sequel. Marion now lives in Pretoria East, South Africa with her husband, sons and a crazy black ‘Scottie’. A member and moderator of the South African Christian Writers Group, Marion can be contacted via email on marionu(at)telkomsa(dot)net or through her website www.inkslinger.co.cc

Tuesday, April 20, 2010

Have You Ever Met a Story World Character? by Ruth Ann Dell



We often hear about the importance of a writer belonging to a critique group. Over six years ago, ICFW's Shirley Corder founded a non-fiction group called Truth Talk. I had the privilege of being one of the five initial members. Shirl and I lived in South Africa, but our homes were two days' drive apart. Jan and Yvonne were on opposite sides of America while Elaine lived in a small English village.


None of us had broadband or Skype in those days, but strong bonds of friendship developed among us as Truth Talk emails flew to and from our computers. We honed our writing skills, prayed together and became a close-knit unit supporting each other in our daily lives.


After several years I visited England with my husband and younger daughter. Elaine's village was one of the proposed places on our itinerary as a much loved aunt also lived there. I asked Elaine for her phone number and we planned to meet if at all possible.


I called Elaine from my aunt's house. I waited for her to pick up the phone and my anticipation grew as I imagined a flurry of excited squeals of joy and laughter as we spoke to each other for the first time.

Elaine answered my call and I said, "Hello, Elaine, this is Ruth speaking."

There was no response.

"Hello?"

"Hello, Elaine. Are you there?"

Still no response.

I was about to put the phone down when she spoke to me in a rather vague manner. I was nonplussed by her initial lack of reaction, but as we chatted the words came tumbling out. Elaine gave me directions to her house and later I visited her. It was so good to meet her at long last and give her a big hug.

Later I discovered the reason for Elaine's stunned silence. She had been totally immersed in the story world of the book she was writing. As she wrestled with a dilemma involving one of her key characters, who happened to be called Ruth, her phone rang. When she answered the call she was startled to hear a voice saying, "Hello, Elaine, this is Ruth speaking." Her first reaction was that her character had  phoned to give her side of the story!

We often laugh about this incident, but it gives an insight as to how characters become real people to their creators.

Has there ever been a time when your characters have come to life? This could be from a book you're reading or writing. If so, please leave a comment and tell us about it.

Ruth Ann Dell writes children's stories and international Christian fiction from her home in a sunny South African suburb. She is a member of several writing groups including the American Christian Fiction Writers and Writer's Ink. Her desire is to craft gripping stories which draw her readers into a closer relationship with God.

Ruth Ann and her husband have lived in several countries and are renovating a cottage in the heart of Ireland.